Flew through the mountains
Across the highest peak
And embrace the eminence
Felt the world beneath him
Felt the cold breeze’s caress
Carelessly swaying away
Fought the wind, against the flow
Tried to reach the sun, no thoughts to bow
Storms rushed with a vengeance
Shattered all the myths of his power
Only warmth was that of the tears
He had a broken wing,
Ohh! He had a broken wing
Thundering down,
Piercing the clouds apart
- Drishya V Prabhakaran
- 28th April 2011
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myy goddd powerful ...nd ur drwaing is awesome
ReplyDeletei agree with the above comment but i feel the poem needs an ending.. it looks incomplete......
ReplyDeletethankyou frnds ..
ReplyDeletewell it had been better if i knew ur names as well.
The poem is about shattering of the ambitions n dreams after reaching a certain level in life. the end was piercing the clouds apart..meant shattering of the dreams apart... anyways thanks fr ur comments :)
as ur thought ur painting is also beautiful and wonderful keep it up dear. Would like to see more of your wonderful thought as well as your painting
ReplyDeletethankx rajuata.. sure more is coming :)
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